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Wednesday, November 4, 2020

My Terrifying holiday

 


Atlanta

                                                         Fishing- Recount 

Introduction

I was so terrified. What if I fall? Maybe I’ll get eaten? What if I die?  What if a shark kills me? It's my first time. I don’t know how I'm going to do this? oh my gosh! I was so excited but scared at the same time. Someone tell me how to do this! During the holidays I went to my aunt's house on September the 28th.


  I got a bit excited when we went to the wharf we went to go Fishing. We also waited for our cousins to get there while we were waiting. We were preparing our rods to go straight away. When we got on the wharf. The smell of the sea was very salty but it had a nice breeze to it. It was very smooth and calming. There was a sense of calmness like a bunch of puppies sleeping.


 As the weather cooled down we got dressed in our warm clothes. When we got into Paihia, we stopped to get bait, and then I saw Maketu, Puti, and his family near the bait shop. I said “Hi”. When we all got to the wharf, my family and I grabbed our fishing rods and went fishing. I was still a little scared but I got over it and carried on fishing. Elsie left me and my cousin Hine at the wharf to go to the bathroom. I just stood for 2 minutes then sat down because my legs were still shaking from the worry. I thought I would get eaten by a shark. I  reeled the rod up, then threw it back in till they came. I gave the rod to my cousin so I could rest.



Later that day, My cousin went to throw the fishing line in. I walked past her and my jersey got hooked on it so I yelled, “Aria” I got scared and ran away far from the rod. 1 hour later, we had to leave the wharf to have dinner. Afterward, I had a shower and then I went to bed. 


Summary, That time was the most terrifying but also exciting and funny holiday ever. I would totally do that again but soon so that is what happened during my holiday. It was one of the best ones I’ve had in the end. 


4 comments:

  1. Loved reading your recount draft! Keep it up! DREAM BIG AND HAVE IDEAS FULL! :)

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  2. Atlanta, you really have improved this piece of writing by adding in your thoughts. I was really wanting to find out what the experience was that you were so worried about. You also are making great progress in your consistency with full stops and capital letters. Well done. I am a bit confused with the order of events though. Do you see why?

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  3. what an awesome recount Atlanta you have such good question an well done

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